User:Acanthuridae/Pareutropius debauwi/PlatOccidentalis Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Acanthuridae


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Acanthuridae/Pareutropius_debauwi?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pareutropius debauwi

Lead
The lead for classification is good!

Content
There are a few sentences that are just a few words or not complete sentences, like "are a riverine.." or "oviparous species"

The "aquarium life" section reads more like a pamphlet on how to care for the fish because of the command sentence "provide the species..." Maybe just change up the wording there?

In the "conservation and threats" section, it would be interesting to see what parts of their life history allow them to be so widespread! (if this information is even out there, of course)

Tone and Balance
Everything sounds neutral and informational!

Sources and References
Citations!!

Organization
Potentially putting "biology & behavior" near "conservation & threats" would allow the reader to segue into why they are so widespread maybe?

Images and Media
If there are any online, some images throughout this would be really great to see what they look like in the wild and what they look like in aquariums!