User:Acd88/Magnetofection/Abudiman99 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Acd88


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Acd88/Magnetofection?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Magnetofection

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

 * It seems that the author has summarized what her topic is into a few sentences. Although the last sentence "In 1978.." is more suitable in the history section instead of a lead. Asides from that, the lead is concise and not overly detailed.

Content

 * The content added is relevant to the section. However, I think the author can expand more in the main subsections such as applications and recent developments
 * A history of how they were invented could add more information to how this technology is developed.
 * The subsections were also broken down appropriately in their right sections

Tone and Balance

 * Content added is neutral and merely informative without bias.

Sources and References

 * Sources used were published by reputable journal publishers and mostly current/up-to date
 * Although some sources/citations were missing (unlinked), it seems that think they were put in the right place in the reference section
 * There is one reference that has an error, just make sure to have it fixed!

Organization

 * Content added is good and easy to read. Adding hyperlinks or referring them to other Wikipedia pages was good since it refers me to other wikipedia pages to read about keywords that I don't understand.
 * I think that applications can be moved to the end since its more towards "future implications"

Overall Impression

 * Overall, it does a great job in explaining what magentofection is, as long as each sections are expanded
 * Adding a picture for the topic, or even an example of an application would be a great idea for readers to see what its like.