User:Acd88/Magnetofection/Dtbooth Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Acd88


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Magnetofection


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead

The introduction provides a brief description of magnetofection, how it is used, and its relevance in science. It is brief, yet achieves its goal of introducing the topic at hand.

Content

Some sections of the article are much more fleshed out than others at this state; there are some details, in particular towards the end of the article, that could afford more detailing on the Applications section. This is an important aspect of the article, and is necessary in providing a sense of completeness to this work.

The Principles section could also use slightly more amounts of detail, as currently a summary of the science is presented, but for those seeking a more rigorous understanding of magnetofection, more concerning the forces/chemistry at play would be beneficial.

Tone and Balance

The tone of the article overall is quite neutral, taking no biased perspective with regards to translating the work to a general audience.

Sources and References

References are plenty for the size of the article, ranging in period from the early 2000s until the present year. The references are well cited within the write-up itself, providing sufficient support for the claims the article makes.

Organization

The article is well organized with multiple headings, with each their own set of subsections. There is a lot of space for writeup in this article that has yet to be filled, and yet I believe once the author does so this will feel like a well developed independent work.

Images and Media

A simple cartoon image is utilized to help visualize the principles of magnetofection in biotechnology, which is appropriate for the article.

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The topic's sections, once completely fleshed out by the writer, should amply provide enough information to more than warrant its place as an independent article.

Overall ImpressionsI think that the writer has done a great work starting up here, and just needs to round out completing a few of the sections that they have started in order to complete the article