User:Acdas1201/Malnutrition/Ryan Gromoll Peer Review

Looking at your first image and its caption compared to the portion of the article pertaining to malnutrition, this picture looks good! I don't believe that that child in the image is classified as a "baby", I would re-label the caption with the word child instead of baby... I could be wrong though I do not know that child's age. I looked at the original posting in Flickr and it doesn't say the reason why that child is suffering from protein malnutrition... it is most likely insufficient nutrients but we can't be sure of that due to the original posting not stating the reason why, therefore I would edit the captions you've put in and make those changes (just a suggestion)... I hope these little bits of information help!

Looking at your second image and its caption compared to the portion of the article pertaining to overnutrition I have a few comments. Images in Wikipedia aren't typically very big and depending on the size of the viewers screen (if I was on a phone for example) I wouldn't be able to read that graph. The portion of the article you're referencing does not state anything about diabetes and just states the fact that people are overeating, therefore I am going to recommend a different picture. The graph also states dates from 1990 to the year 2000 which was over 20 years ago and that data isn't relevant anymore. Hope this helps and good job so far!

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