User:AceBunnyHop/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Laura Les

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
This article is start class and needs more information. It matters because Les is a popular transgender musician, and she is part of an influential music group. My preliminary impression is that it has a good baseline of information, but has a lot of room for more depth and information about her career.

Evaluate the article
The lead section is well written and concise. The article is a start class, and each section following could use more information, particularly the career section. The entire article has a neutral tone. Most of the sources used are interviews with Les or reviews written in journalistic sites. There are two photos of Les performing in this article and they are accurately captioned. All of the sources are current; most are from 2019-2022. The information in the article is accurate, but it needs more information and some of the sentences should be grammatically reworked.