User:Acerda1/Abraham Maslow/Cwdascher15 Peer Review

General info
Acerda1
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Acerda1/Abraham Maslow
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Abraham Maslow

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello, I just saw Abraham's Wikipedia article. That is the first person I saw who actually had a full page about him. Not sure that you edited any of that yet. Looks like you are off to a good start. You have some good reliable sources there you can add to your article. Since the article has a lot of supporting information already, I would try to see if any of that information is neutral or to date. I see that the main article breaks down his research and the back ground information about it. I would add a body paragraph stating the impact his work/research had on the world.