User:Acharymn/3D printed firearm/GunnarLacher Peer Review

General info
Acharymn Link to the draft you're reviewing  User: Acharymn/India 3D printing  Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
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Evaluate the drafted changes
Peer Review Lead In -


 * 1) One thing that the article does well, is how you set up the paragraphs. The article is clearly organized and shows what the text is about and the information you are trying to convey.
 * 2) Personally, I think this article is pretty good, and it doesn't need any changes.
 * 3) The article feels short with 14 sources, important to explain them all in detail.
 * 4) One thing that I could apply to my own article is the organization and the headers that help break up the text into different sections.

Article Lead Section -


 * 1) Yes, I feel satisfied knowing this information.
 * 2) Yes, the lead reflects the most important information.
 * 3) The lead doesn't give more weight to certain points of the article than others.

Structure -


 * 1) Yes, the sections are well organized and in a sensible order.
 * 2) Each section has an equal length and an equal importance level. Each section feels important to the article and helps further explain the main point.
 * 3) From what I can tell all perspectives are being represented in the article.
 * 4) It is trying to convey, how important 3D printing is, especially in India.

Neutral Content -


 * 1) I could guess that the author agrees with what is being said in the article.
 * 2) Yes, the article doesn't have any words or phrases that feel neutral.
 * No, the articles don't make any claims on behalf of unnamed groups.
 * 1) The topic is neither negative nor positive.

Reliable Resource -


 * 1) All of the statements are connected to reliable sources.
 * 2) None of the sources are the same.
 * No, the statements are correct and all labeled.

Reviewers Reflection -

After reading this article I plan to do these three things to my own article.


 * 1) Organize my article better
 * 2) Make sure my article is neutral and doesn't favor a curtain side.