User:Achilles' spiel/Hinduism in the West/Kding20 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Achilles' spiel


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Achilles' spiel/Hinduism in the West
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hinduism in the West

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the whole text is the addition to the original article, since it's not bolded and the original article is super short and lack of details. The addition is well-developed and provides a lot of extra information about Hinduism. The wording is very well-considered, and by adding the information has made the original contains more information about the theme. Maybe adding a transitional paragraph between the original and the addition would make the whole text more easy to read, since not so many people are familiar with Hinduism in general.