User:Achilles' spiel/Hinduism in the West/Nazsultana Peer Review

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Achilles' spiel


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Achilles' spiel/Hinduism in the West
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hinduism in the West

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section of the article does not seem to have been updated yet.

The content is well-written and relevant to the topic, with no noticeable spelling nor grammatical errors.

The content is neutrally written and does not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of any position, rather it presents facts given from different viewpoints. There are multiple viewpoints represented and clearly referenced to in the writing. The content improves the quality of the article by providing extensive details about a prevalent, influential figure seen in New Age Hinduism. The strengths of the content lie in the breadth and quality of the analysis done on Sadhguru's influence on Hinduism and his followers. The student clearly did extensive research on the topic and I believe that once they've updated their citations the section they've written will be a great addition to the main article.