User:Acl370/Occipital bun/Abigailsanchezanth153 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Acl370


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Acl370/Occipital_bun?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Occipital bun

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

After reviewing the article and the dashboard I am seeing similarities. You can add cupule of more sentences on the different subheading, you just need to add more information that's not posted in the original article. Advice I can give is finding new article with different information to add.