User:Acl370/Occipital bun/MattAnthStudent Peer Review

Hello! I think this is such a great article to choose for the wiki project, as it goes along with what we are learning in class, and the academic discussion around the significance of the occipital bun is constantly being updated. The rating of the article says it is a start-class, which is perfect for this project. I am not entirely sure what you added to the article as your sandbox looks like it includes large parts of the article, which is a great way to see what your information is adding. I think your sources and links look great, you have a ton of information that you have added in, and it all looks fantastic. Your writing style is very wikipedia-esque as well, so overall I think you are doing a great job!