User:Acldn/Adonis aestivalis/Salehi.Hana Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Acldn


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Acldn/Adonis_aestivalis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Adonis aestivalis

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I see that there are no changes applied to the lead, and I think maybe there should be. Even though there is a good introductory sentence, the lead doesn't describe what the article will go into, or have enough overall detail about the plant. However the additions to the toxicity section are both relevant and have improved what was already there before. All of the information added seems very neutral and not one sided. I would recommend maybe adding a new subsection about reproduction rather than just adding a bit of detail in the description section.

The added content in general seems very neutral and has added to the quality of the article. For further improvement however maybe a little bit more information can be added in general, as the article is still not too detailed. What you have already added however has really improved the article since the content previously written is now much more descriptive. In particular the additions to the toxicity section are good. Also potentially adding some images would further improve the article.