User:Acmunoz14/Little Men/Benjamin Fincher Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Acumonoz14
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Acmunoz14/Little Men1

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * Are the sources current?
 * Check a few links. Do they work?

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?

peer review
1. What does the article do well? What impressed you? The article does a good job of introducing the subject and explaining the background and inspiration of the book. Lead Section: It is a bit confusing towards the end. The brief summary of the book and how it falls in order of the trilogy is a little clunky and difficult to understand. The second to last sentence is especially confusing. Clear Structure: The article is well structured. Balanced Coverage: There appear to be only a few sources so the article could use a few more references. Neutral Content: The content seems balanced and fair with a wide variety of information summarizing the key plot points 2. What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes improve the article? The plot summary area needs to be edited. There are several grammar issues and style issues. 3. What’s the most important thing the writer could do to improve the article? Edit. The content is good but there needs to be some revisions throughout the article. 4. Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know! I really like the format of this article and plan to incorporate some aspects to my own article.!Benjamin Fincher (talk) 18:45, 9 February 2020 (UTC)

Thank you for reviewing my article! I'll take your advice and begin making the appropriate changes.