User:Acn339/T.e.j.a.s/Gracemck Peer Review

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Acn339, Anon0296
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Lead:

provides a good, concise overview of some backstory and who they are. not overly detailed but I would like to see a couple words on what they are doing at the high school (more of a quick summary as I know you detail it later on, just feels out of place when no info about what they r doing is provided..)

Content: All is relevant in my opinion! This article will definitely help to spread the knowledge of the existence of this company which is amazing as it helps people regardless of race, ethnicity, or socioeconomic status!

- for the parterres section, maybe provide examples. EX in the Texas A&M section they "protect low-income and minority communities" but how so? just by data collection or do the data collection influence the occurrence of projects. if so explain these projects.

Tone and Balance: all neutral, none of it leans to making them seem better or worse than they might be.

- do any controversies surrounding t.e.j.a.s exist? include them if so

Organization:

- is "Ana Pat=rras" correct? I think there isn't supposed to be the =

- The sentence " Te.j.a.s was founded in 1995 by Juan Parras and Ana Pat=rras under the former name Unidos Contra Environmental Racism, whose first goal was to stop the construction of the Cesar Chavez High School due to environmental hazard from nearby plants." is kind of long, maybe add some more commas or break up into two.

- Maybe less bullet points and more just paragraphs.

Images and Media

- include some photos of the people who run it and photos from their projects