User:Acont061/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating? Lucy (Australopithecus)
Lucy (Australopithecus)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen to evaluate this article because it seems to be lacking a bit more about Lucy's mock-up. In essence, I think the article would benefit from more descriptions about what Lucy may have looked like.

Evaluate the article
Everything in the article appears to be relevant to the topic at hand. It does a fairly good job of making sure to add details about Lucy's discovery, as well as placing her skeletal remains into the proper timeline. I think some information that could be added would have to do with the 3-dimensional mock-up of what anthropologists believe Lucy may have looked like. The addition of this information would serve to give readers a more illustrative idea of who Lucy was and what she looked like. The links and sources all seem to be working.