User:Acryan1/Feral cat/Ldonahue3254 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Acryan1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Acryan1/Feral_cat?action=edit


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Feral cat

Evaluate the drafted changes
Everything is looking great! One of the edits you may consider making is in the colonies section. You use the term "semi-feral" which can be hyperlinked to the Semi-feral article. There may be some other terms that could be hyperlinked, but this was the only one that I noticed. I also think you could move the colonies edit you made onto the end of the first paragraph in the colonies section. The information you added would most likely fit well in that first paragraph. I've also noticed that sources 3 and 4 are the same source. Other than that, your sources look good!

An extra source that I think has some useful information is https://www.hahf.org/wp-content/uploads/media-4/Jessup-article-on-Wildlife-impact-javma_225_9_1377.pdf