User:Acuna1316/Jaafar Jotheri/Dre Mitchell Peer Review

General info
(Acuna1316)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Acuna1316/Jaafar Jotheri
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) I found the links for further information on some of the more obscure words or topics helpful
 * 2) Good job explaining what Jotheri focused on in his writing
 * 3) Good introduction in the lead paragraph


 * 1) Some of the other obscure topics could have links to more information
 * 2) Short, even though I'm not sure how much information there is for him
 * 3) Not sure if the selected publications section is finished


 * 1) Add some information about the selected publications
 * 2) Talk about what he has or hopes to accomplish in his writing
 * 3) A bit more backstory could be helpful