User:Acuna1316/Jaafar Jotheri/Q945E965 Peer Review

Peer Review from Easton Vogt:

3 Positives-


 * The subheadings are well constructed and efficient.
 * The basic info about Jaafar Jotheri is straight forward and compactly informational.
 * References and hyperlinks seem to be used correctly.

3 Areas for Improvement-


 * More References if possible, so more subheadings can be added.
 * Expand upon more topics connected to Jotheri.
 * Include references after every sentence with new information.

3 Suggestions for Improvement-


 * Avoid repeating name of Jaafar Jotheri at the start of some of the sentences.
 * Maybe provide a subheading on the topic of his PHD thesis. This could be an interesting section to explore.
 * It could also be useful to describe some basic summaries or overviews of the 20 academic articles he contributed to. Just to show his academic focus in the field of archaeology.

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