User:Acw055/Topic-based authoring/Angeluztb Peer Review

General info
Acw055
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Acw055/Topic-based authoring - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Topic-based authoring - Wikipedia
 * Topic-based authoring - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
For the technical communication topic of "Topic-based authoring", there are some minor changes, additions, and a new section with the topic's history and development. While there's not much change in the lead section, the body section has new information with appropriate sources; specifically, in the development section, relative history and recent events provide a certain degree of information and content that compliments the overall topic.

With that being said, the development section can certainly expand greatly if the provided sources can attribute more recent events to the topic. The flow and tone can benefit some finesse with the technicalities.