User:Adam.davey/College football/Prich080 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Adam.Davey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * College football
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * College football

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Adam decided to add to an article, He picked a few articles about football and I cannot find his contributions. I think it is a bit sad because I would have loved to see his contribution and how he can add to the article. There are a lot of stuff to say or rephrase when it comes to college football and its importance for young men who are on the come up and how much they need to work to get in the league.

Overall the article is already amazing. Everything is clear, there is good content, the lead clearly answers the question you might ask yourself when you google "College football". Everything is neutral and the sources are on point. The use of illustrations is well done. I believe that Adam can do more. This is allowing me to re-think my strategy when it comes to adding to an article.