User:Adamadal/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Zhao Dan

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Zhao Dan is one of the most important actor and director in the "golden age" of modern Chinese cinema. Through him, we can have other way to look at and understand the "golden age" of modern Chinese cinema.

Evaluate the article
For the lead, it clearly describes the topic for this artivle which is Zhao Dan. It is sample and straight forward, but Zhao Dan was not only an actor but also a director which didn't metioned on the lead section.

The content is relevant to the article topic and the information were up to date but for this topic which is Zhao Dan. The Chinese article has more information than English article. It can also add more content about what his achievement before and after he dead.

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 * First Prize of Excellent Film individual, by Ministry of Culture of China(1949)


 * China Film century Award, by National Radio and Television Administration (1995)

The tone is neutral nothing overrepresented or underrepresented.The organization and writing quality are good. The sources backed up the content, all the link works but the number of sources are quite limited. In chinese article, one soucre was actully an letter writen by Zhao Dan 's friend which is not good. It can also add more image about the role played by Zhao Dan instead of a list of movies he's been in.

This article belows to WikiProject Biography and WikiProject China, I can see people add more context in talk page try to improve the article.

Overall, the article is good. All the contents are staight forward and easy to understand. It can still add more like Zhao Dan's achievement in the "golden age" of modern Chinese cinema. The article is a little bit short due to lack of english sourse adding more non-english sources can be help since many material about Zhao Dan were written in Chinese instead of English.