User:Adambletcher/Naked marriage in China/Guancong lance li Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Adambletcher


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Adambletcher/Naked_marriage_in_China?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Naked marriage in China

Evaluate the drafted changes
This draft mainly expounds that the author wants to analyze the influence of media propaganda on naked marriage. The author believes that naked marriage is not only a manifestation of pure love that is not contaminated by secular prejudice but also a challenge to Chinese tradition. I think it is a novel and positive point of view. Looking forward to the finished article.