User:Adamjiwa/Video on demand/Mmonday17 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
Some things that I think could be expanded on is that 'Role of peer-to-peer file sharing' especially since I feel like this has expanded from what is mentioned in the article. On the 'See Also' portion, I feel like each individual app or item can be linked ie. spotify, netflix, etc. And I'm not sure on this one but I would maybe emphasize that almost each of these streaming services are creating their own content within their own company that can only be watched by them. Maybe include some of the downfall or issues that have been created by these multiple streaming services.