User:Adamn1626/Online vetting/Amandab430 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Adamn1626


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Adamn1626/Online_vetting?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Online vetting

Evaluate the drafted changes
- The article so far has two clearly outlined body topics, Views & Practice and Legal Position.

- The resources list is beautifully done, with many sources to back the writings.

- Use of a quote off the right side under Views & Practice draws the readers attention and backs the points being made and gives a quick description for those looking at the article quickly.

- A strong intro/lead will help this piece excel and allow the reader to feel out the rest of the article from the start.

- The content added brings a refreshed look on the article already published and adds new data and outlooks that were not previously tended to.