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Article Evaluation
I chose the article "New Kingdom of Egypt". After reading it, I realized that there are a lot of points brought up however very little detail about them. This is predominant in the first section of the article. A perfect example of this would be Ramesside period which is named after the eleven pharaohs. I plan on adding content to this section during the course of this class. There is a lot of unsourced information and odd sentence formating that need a bit more of attention. I will rephrase some information, without changing the overall focus.