User:Addayjayne/Gus Dapperton/KW978394 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Addayjayne


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Addayjayne/Gus_Dapperton?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gus Dapperton
 * Gus Dapperton

Evaluate the drafted changes
The editor filled out the article with a lot of relevant information that was missing from the current version of the article. I also like the paragraph they added to under History, about how Gus Dapperton gained popularity. I think the only thing the editor could add was more information under his different albums, such as any reviews, or if they have been nominated for or won any awards. Other than that, the editor added good information to the article, and did so in the proper "Wikipedia" manner.