User:Addiekni/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Oxamyl

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Oxamyl is a pesticide that poses health risks to humans, so it it important that information about the risks associated with it be available. It relatively short right now and has several aspects I think could be improved.

Evaluate the article
I think this article does a good job of providing a clear overview of the most relevant information about the topic. For the opening sentence, I think the information about it coming in granulated and liquid form is not significant enough to be included. In the Structure and Uses section, it is also stated that oxamyl is a crystalline solid, which seems to contradict the earlier statement that it is available as a liquid in its pure form. It could be good to briefly touch on some of the reasons it is hazardous in opening section, and additional information about the granulated form specifically being banned should be included in the lower section. There are several instances where oxamyl is capitalized in the middle of a sentence, but I think it should be lowercase since it is the name of a chemical. "Malaise," "Headache," and "Miosis" in the second paragraph in the Structure and Uses section should also be lowercase. There's also an extra space between a quote symbol and the first word of a quote in that paragraph, and there are several subject-verb agreement errors or phrases I find awkward.