User:Addyalaska/Avalanche/Brontesmithclass Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Addyalaska Addy Wright


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Addyalaska/Avalanche?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Avalanche
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Avalanche

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

''Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?''

Everything is relevant to the article, it is nicely organized. Well done addition to the avalanche wikipedia article. One critique is under Impacts on burial survival rate section is changing “warm snow is wetter” to- “Warm snow contains higher moisture content”

''Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?''

The article is neutral, no claims that appear heavily biased.

Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?

The burial survival rate seems to be specific to impacting recreators. Is there a consequence to infrastructure for climate change’s effects on avalanches?

''Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?''

The links work and support the claims made.

''Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?''

Each fact is supported by a reliable resource. The information is represented by many countries. They do all seem to be focused on more wealthy parts of the world, and largely impacts from a recreational standpoint.

''Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added?''

Good mix of dates all within the past 20 years. I think the only missing info I can think of would be out of the scope of this assignment. For instance looking at why the frequency or types of avalanches would matter outside of a recreational standpoint.