User:Addyalaska/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Avalanche

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I will be evaluating the "Avalanches and climate change" section of the article. As a skier, being informed on how avalanches may be effected by climate change in the coming decades is important to me. My initial impression of this section of the article was that it is underdeveloped. The information is high quality, but only surface level.

Evaluate the article
While the section on avalanches and climate change is well cited, fact-focused, and unbiased, it’s brief and only scratches the surface of the topic. It does not discuss the potential impacts of dust layers in snow in dry areas, or the potential for avalanches burials to become more deadly to due the density of wet snow. Additionally, while the references are plentiful and high quality, it seems like much of the information was closely paraphrased from the sources, so it could benefit from being rewritten. There are also some minor issues with the grammar.