User:Adelaahh/Charismatic Christianity/Isabellavrj Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Adelaah


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Adelaahh/Charismatic_Christianity?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Charismatic Christianity

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

While the student doesn't seem to have started yet, there is room for improvement in the chosen article. More than anything, I noticed that the article focuses mostly on Charismatic Christianity movements in the United States. The student could create a section about this movement in other countries. Perhaps the charismatic christianity takes inspiration from other ideals or religions?