User:Adeledaniels5/Early childhood intervention/Lily's pads Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Early Childhood Intervention


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * History & EHDI


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I noticed that you duplicated the identical text from the same article " History" paragraph, and there was no editing. Just wanted to make sure you didn't forget or planned to change later in case you did. Also, I suggested adding more Early Hearing Detection Intervention (EHDI) lines because I needed to know why this was necessary and for what. I'm amazed that you were conscientious about following the regulations and that everything appeared to be so straightforward. You did an amazing job! :) (LILY)