User:Adeledaniels5/Early childhood intervention/OReinebach Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Adeledaniels5/Early childhood intervention


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Adeledaniels5/Early_childhood_intervention?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Early childhood intervention

Evaluate the drafted changes
- "A more modern form of this act is the No Child Left Behind Act passed in the early 2000s. Then only a few years later the Handicapped Children’s Early Education Assistance Act of 1968 was passed which established 75 to 100 programs to support preschool aged children that are disabled." In this part, links to the wikipedia articles should be included here (for No Child Left Behind). The placement of the first sentence before the next seems confusing since the "then" implies after early 2000s. Might be better to put at the end (keep things in chronological order)

- "Commonly cited factors that may put an infant or toddler at risk of developmental delay include low birth weight, respiratory distress as a newborn, lack of oxygen, brain hemorrhage, infection, and prenatal exposure to toxins through maternal substance abuse." This sentence only relates to factors that may physical developmental delays. Are children who are experiencing language developmental delays (because of social/environmental factors) eligible for early intervention and/or protected under IDEA as well? Maybe include a sentence about "other factors, not commonly cited but often experienced"

-yes, add more to the Early Hearing Detection Intervention! There's no wikipedia page for this, so maybe talk briefly about why it was established (what were the practices/protocol prior to this?)