User:AdenWhite/Curtis Lake (Clark County, Washington)/Cook.tanner Peer Review

Peer review
I am reviewing Adenwhite article on Curtis lake. the link is here: User:AdenWhite/sandbox

To begin I would like to say the little there is very neutral. It only really has a lead but it does a good job to introduce the subject. There's slightly more info than there is on the article. The lead could be a little more concise. The content is very relevant to the content. I'm unsure if the content is up to date as there are no sources. The content seems to be very neutral and unbiased, although again there are no sources. The content is also held on the users sandbox and not the sandbox draft. There's not much organization its all one block of texts and the sentence do not flow super well. The content is written well. It's very factually stated. No grammar errors from what I can tell. Overall this article has great penitential. It really needs sources and a little more organization. I would love to see media and live links. I'm very excited as to where this article will go and improve.