User:AdenWhite/Curtis Lake (Clark County, Washington)/Trinityherndon Peer Review

Peer review

 * I will be reviewing the work of AdenWhite.
 * Link to draft that I'm reviewing: User:AdenWhite/sandbox

I think you did a great job at keeping all the content you suggested to add neutral and precise. The content that was added also seems relevant. All the information is about Curtis Lake and nothing seems to stray from this topic. I'm not sure if the content or sources used for that are up to date though because no references were linked showing what sources that you got this information from. Adding references for the claims you are in your edit will help improve the quality of the article by showing reliability. I also think most of the information that you're suggesting to add could be talked about briefly in your lead, then spread out and talked about further to create more sections in this article. An example of this would be taking the section of your writing that says "Fishing is allowed on the beach or in a boat, which can be accessed by a public boat launch. Largemouth Bass, Northern Pike, and Panfish are all located in Curtis Lake." and putting it in its own section under a heading titled "Fishing at Curtis Lake", or something similar, while still keeping a small note about fishing in your lead section. That would help to break things up and help readers more effectively find specific information about the lake, instead of having to read through everything first. On top of this, I think that an image of the lake could be added to enhance the article, as well as show where the topic is addressing. After reading through your additions, I was left wondering what parts, if any, of the original article are you going to leave and what parts do you want to change? This would be good to note as well so you can see those changes all mapped out, and so that those peer reviewing your work can help. Overall, all the information you added really adds value to this article and will be a big step up from where it was because you wrote a lot of things about Curtis Lake that were not stated in the article before. Trinityherndon (talk) 05:26, 7 November 2019 (UTC)