User:Aderush/Greenhouse gas emissions/Bixle023 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aderush


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aderush/Greenhouse_gas_emissions?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that the draft of your article is pretty solid. I think you went into good detail about the greenhouse gases being emitted, where they come from, and ways to fix them. I also thought that the photos you added went well with the information in the page. Overall, I think this wiki page is very well done. One suggestion I have is that you could possibly split up the given information by each gas (add different section headings), or in a cause and effect way, but I also think the way it is now works well!