User:Aderush/Greenhouse gas emissions/Gray0696 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aderush


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aderush/Greenhouse_gas_emissions?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Greenhouse gas emissions

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that you already added your current drafted work into the document, and there, I see that you have linked your information to sources, but in the sandbox draft, you don't have any sources or attributions for your information, which confused me a little bit. I'm not exactly sure what sources are yours because of this, so I don't think I have the ability to evaluate that. You might want to include that in your draft because that is how he can see what you have contributed to the article, even if things get changed later. I think that you have a great start here, with a good neutral tone, and a nice balanced structure that fits with the rest of the article. You might want to add in a specific percentage number at the beginning of the paragraph like in all the other sections to keep it consistent.