User:Aderush/Greenhouse gas emissions/Pearl2070 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aderush


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aderush/Greenhouse_gas_emissions?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Greenhouse gas emissions

Evaluate the drafted changes
Excellent informative graphics/visuals.

Sentences in the first paragraph contain facts that need to have citations. Some wording could be clarified, for instance, in the line "From only focusing on dairy systems of 20 value chains in 12 countries"... what are dairy systems of 20 value chains? In text citation subscripts should go after the period of a sentence.