User:Adg21a/Basking in reflected glory/Med20a Peer Review

General info
Adg21a
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Adg21a/Basking in reflected glory
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Basking in reflected glory

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

They have not yet edited the lead paragraph, but the other information provided adds to areas lacking in the original article. Specifically, the addition of the significance of pronoun usage and nationalism is both interesting and a useful piece of information that is not expounded upon in the original article. It is good to see a list of new heading ideas to add to the article as they continue to work. The writing is clear and backed up by references. I think the addition of this information makes for a more comprehensive and interesting article.