User:Adillon243/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(Kenneth Merchant - Wikipedia‎)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Kenneth Merchant is an accounting teacher, and I want to research him in order to learn more about what goes into accounting .)

Evaluate the article
(The article is very concise, and doesn't go much into detail about Kenneth's life. When detailing his education, it just lists the schools he went to without any information or detail about them. It's strengths are that it tells the viewer what he has accomplished and what he is most well known for. The article could be improved by telling the viewer more about Kenneth's personal life and more detail about his life in general. I think the article is highly underdeveloped. The article's lead sentence is as bland as the rest of the paper, but gives you a good idea of what the article will cover. While the content is up to date, it isn't very detailed. The lead is unbearably under detailed. The article does a very good job at being neutral, although it is hard not to be with a topic such as this. I think this article has a lot of potential. Editors should bring up more of his personal life, and early life that lead to his position as a revered teacher.)