User:AdondeDoko29/Juvenile court/Ding4422 Peer Review

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AdondeDoko29
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I really like how, as a reader, off the bat what the entire article is going to be about. I also found myself nodding my head in agreement and I think that with the importance if the topic, it makes for an extremely great intro! I also like how you included question at the end to make people think. The onky thing that I would make sure to add in, is statistics.