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Section B: Editorial Plan

Step 2: Write several paragraphs that describe:

The first thing I plan to change about my article is the introduction section. This section needs to be expanded and describes what the article is about better. Include things like types of exhibits, types of museums that use exhibits, also a brief description of why exhibit design is important.

The second thing I plan to change is the description of the exhibits that we see. I also want to add details about what goes into an exhibit (replicas, signs, virtual technology, glass protection, etc.)

The third thing I want to change is adding a section about who creates the exhibits. This section would include a brief description of the different people who played part in the exhibit such as researchers and curators. The article now mentions “five different types of visitors” but does not expand further than that.

The fourth thing I want to change is adding a section about the visitors who will view the exhibit. Since the purpose is to educate them it is key that we understand who is seeing them.

The challenges I think I will face are presenting information about exhibit design when so many factors change it. These challenges include museum size and type. I think implementing my proposed changes will greatly improve the article overall.