User:Adoobs/Audio editing software/Diligent Daisy Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Your lead is strong and makes great points. However, it could use better transitions between sentence to sentence.

The "History" section could be stronger and longer as it is currently 1-2 sentences long.

The rest of the article is strong and very detailed. However, it does look like walls of text. I would add more pictures, maybe every other section in your article? This way, it can keep the reader entertained.

As cool as audio editing software may be, it can be hard to understand to someone who doesn't know anything about it.