User:Adr2018/United Farm Workers/HandsomeSquidward311 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Adr2018


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Adr2018/United_Farm_Workers?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * United Farm Workers

Evaluate the drafted changes
The addition of medical services is a great addition to the existing article, for the clinics is noteworthy of UFW efforts. I can see where the, "1970s" addition will go, but I'm curious to know where the, "Services" section along with the section on Robert Kennedy will go. Will both get their own section? If so, is there a way to elaborate on the clinic and Kennedy a little more? UFW played a major roll in the California primary election of 1968. I know this isn't finished, but this is a good example of missing content.The There are some grammatical errors throughout their contributions. The references provided are sufficient. Overall the article additions are relevant to UFW, are well-organized, and will fit well into the entire article!