User:AdriN070/Yoruba art/ScoutB12 Peer Review

Organization:

The History:

The History section can use some clarity. Perhaps some of that clarity could be achieved by reorganizing the content in that section. For example, the sentence: “there have been a series of Yoruba kingdoms over the past nine centuries”, concisely goes over what is discussed in the first paragraph and yet it is the intro sentence in the second paragraph in this section.

Art and life in Yoruba culture:

The description of how when Europeans discovered the sculptures they assumed it was made by Greeks was interesting but felt a little out of place in the paragraph. Perhaps there is a way it could be more seamlessly integrated if it is deemed relevant?

Sources and references:

Make sure that you are using a thorough amount of resources. I don't see any resources added on to your sandbox page.