User:Adrian Velazquez 2003/Jaghbub/Ashg1177 Peer Review

User:Adrian Velazquez 2003/Jaghbub/Ashg1177 Peer Review,

This article throughly explains Jaghbub and the factors that have made it prevalent. The lead sections gives a simple but informative details that help the reader understand the basis of Judhbub. I also like how the description in the Geography section goes well with the photo inputted. It gives a clear insight of what the city looks like. This article has various individuals linked, which highlights the legitimacy of the article. The history is very detailed and by implementing the subtitles of each important historical moment gives the reader of better understanding of how the city has developed. The article also contains various reliable sources. As the history section makes up most of the article, I would suggest the article could be improved later on with inputting sections like demographics, historical sites, culture and food. These sections could highlight the uniqueness of the city and how it an important subject to research. The work done here is excellent and had proven to have been a significant contribution to the article. Great work!

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