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Additions from Queen's medical school students
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Hello!

We are a group of first year medical students from Queen's University who are editing this page as part of a class assignment. We have compiled a list of suggestions to improve this article and would appreciate any community feedback before we proceed with these edits. Please find below a list of our suggestions:

1) In the diagnosis subsection, change: "A similar behavior called Munchausen syndrome by proxy has been documented in the parent or guardian of a child." To: "A similar illness, Factitious Disorder Imposed on Another (formerly Factitious Disorder by proxy), also exists. This entails a person (not necessarily a parent or guardian), presenting another individual as falsely sick. "

2) In regards to the “diagnosis” section, since extensive research on factitious disorder is not available, a brief summary of disease types that have been mimicked and laboratory diagnostics used to differentiate these cases from true disease could be included using the following table: @JenOttawa This table summarizes the citation listed. It was create from the reviewed data in citation 2, not copied. Did you write this whole table yourself? Is all the content directly paraphrased from citation # 2, or is some text copied? I did not check, just wanted to make sure there are not copyright probs.

3) In Munchausen syndrome, add the following to the end of the first paragraph: “Due to the uncommon and underlying nature of this disorder, it is hard to study as participation in studies is difficult to maintain after suggestion of factitious disorder diagnosis. As such a prognosis is difficult to establish. ”

4) We suggest moving the following sentences to Munchausen syndrome or Munchausen syndrome, rather than Munchausen syndrome:

“There are several symptoms that together point to Munchausen syndrome, including frequent hospitalizations, knowledge of several illnesses, frequently requesting medication such as pain killers, openness to extensive surgery, few or no visitors during hospitalizations, and exaggerated or fabricated stories about several medical problems. Munchausen syndrome should not be confused with hypochondria, as patients with Munchausen syndrome do not really believe they are sick; they only want to be sick, and thus fabricate the symptoms of an illness. It is also not the same as pretending to be sick for personal benefit such as being excused from work or school.[5]” → Munchausen syndrome#Signs and symptoms section

“There are several ways in which the patients fake their symptoms. Other than making up past medical histories and faking illnesses, patients might inflict harm on themselves such as taking laxatives or blood thinners, ingesting or injecting themselves with bacteria, cutting or burning themselves, and disrupting their healing process such as by reopening wounds.[citation needed] Many of these conditions do not have clearly observable or diagnostic symptoms and sometimes the syndrome will go undetected because patients will fabricate identities when visiting the hospital several times.” → Munchausen syndrome#Diagnosis section

5) I would like to change “Munchausen syndrome is a factitious disorder…” to “Munchausen syndrome, a term no longer in use, described a disorder wherein… Factitious disorder is now the term of choice by experts.”

I would also change “Munchausen syndrome fits within the subclass of factitious disorder” to “Munchausen syndrome was the original term used to describe a condition with predominantly…”

6) Modify the introduction of Munchausen syndrome by proxy to incorporate the new terminology of ‘factitious disorder’ and use language that reduces villainization of the perpetrator. "*Remove “Munchausen syndrome is related to Munchausen syndrome by proxy (MSbP/MSP), which refers to the abuse of another person, typically a child, in order to seek attention or sympathy for the abuser.”" *Insert:“Factitious disorder is related to Factitious Disorder Imposed on Another (formerly Munchausen syndrome by proxy), which refers to a caregiver producing illness in a person under their care, typically a child, in order to satisfy a psychological need for praise or sympathy for their devoted care. ”

Many thanks to the Wikipedia community for your insights and feedback! :) Adrianda (talk) 16:54, 7 November 2017 (UTC)

Practice citation insert: Laboratory Diagnosis of Munchausen

A summary of more common and reported cases of factitious disorder (Munchausen syndrome), and the laboratory tests used to differentiate these from authentic disease is provided below: