User:Adriel824/Nike Blazers/Acho98 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Adriel824
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Adriel824/Nike Blazers

Lead evaluation
Overall, the updated lead is much better as it includes more information and details. However, I think that it is over detailed and some of the information that is being presented in the lead could have its own section in the article.

Content evaluation
I think that the content that is being provided is relevant to the topic and is up-to-date. However, there is much more room for improvement and other content that could be added to increase the quality of this article. Some of the content can include how the show is made, stats of where the shoe is sold around the world, how the shoe has developed over the years, etc.

Tone and balance evaluation
The content added is neutral and there were no signs of any bias. Viewpoints were equally represented and there was no attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another.

Sources and references evaluation
The content and facts are all backed up by sources that are reliable. Everything is properly cited and the sources reflect the available literature on the topic. In addition, most of the sources are up-to-date and the links are fully functional. One suggestion I have is providing an external link to Nike's official website that is linked with the shoes.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Organization evaluation
The content is indeed well-written, clear and concise. The way that the author organized and structured the article also makes it very easy to read and understand.

Images and media evaluation
There is one image that is included in the article that adheres to the copyright regulations. I think that adding more media and images would enhance this article. Maybe even including pictures of basketball players or celebrities wearing this shoe.

Overall evaluation
Overall, the quality of this article is a lot better than the original version, but there is still great room for improvements. I think that the author is definitely on the right track in making this article great and with just a few minor fixes, this article has a lot of potential.