User:Aduhe16/Mass communication/MizuAzul Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Aduhe16


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Aduhe16/Mass_communication?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * It didn't look like a draft had been created.


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mass communication

Evaluate the drafted changes
I couldn't find your draft in your article sandbox. I did post a suggestion for a paragraph that could be good to add a citation to on your talk page. If you send me a link to your article draft, I am happy to come back and give feedback.

It is a very long article, so I recommend just picking a small section to work on.

(From what I posted on the article's sandbox talk page)

HI Aduhe16- I was trying to find your sandbox draft to offer a peer review. I agree with many of the comments on the talk page regarding the article being vague, inconsistent at points, and needing citations updated. For our class, though, it might be best to just focus on one paragraph or a few sentences. I thought the below paragraph was interesting because it needed a citation and introduced the rise of social media and new media in comparison to traditional media sources.

(From the article)

In the United States, the study of mass communication is often associated with the practical applications of journalism, television and radio broadcasting, film, public relations, corporate, or advertising. With the diversification of media forms, the study of mass communication has extended to include social media and new media, which both have stronger feedback models than traditional media sources.[citation needed]