User:Adult Ed Career Coach/Mark A. Huselid/Jaguilar2 Peer Review

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General info
Adult Ed Career Coach
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Adult Ed Career Coach/Mark A. Huselid
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Mark A. Huselid

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * I noticed that this individual does not have a personal life or early life section, you should think about adding one.
 * The second sentence is better in a  Personal life or Early life section.
 * Lead paragraph is neutral and well informed
 * You could summarize the individual's greatest achievements in this section or a fun fact about his life that is not included in the article