User:Adv443/Identity management theory/Afm023 Peer Review

General info
ADV443
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Adv443/Identity management theory
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Identity management theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
I'm working off the assumption that the underlined sections are what was updated/added.

Visually, the work looks really good. Paragraphs are organized and similar in size. Content is also clear, concise, and neutral. I also like the examples.

I do think more sources could be useful, as it seems only one was used. I think it could be beneficial for the credibility. This is pretty small of a fix, but every example starts with "for instance". I think using different sentence starters can make the work that much more interesting.

Very slay, good job so far!